After reading the feedback I decided that I would change the layout so that it was for like my style model. I think this makes the magazine look more organised and a lot more like a professional magazine. By changing the pink box it also makes the coverlines at lot neater as in my audience feedback said they looked messy.
I also changed the puff so that the colours were the same as the rest of the front cover. This makes the puff stand out less so that it doesn't take attention away from the main image. It also makes it fit in better with the rest of the front cover.
I made the barcode, price and issue number bigger so it's more noticeable as before it was too small and blended in with the coverlines that were above it.
One of the main thing that needed to change was the main coverline as it was hard to read. So I took on board what the feedback said and made it bigger and ligther which makes it stand out a lot more, I also made the other part of the main coverline straight as it didnn't fit in having it on a slant.
On some of the coverlines I made the first few words a different colour so that you could tell which were which as this was a problem with the original front cover. Changing the colour seperates them without having big gaps between each one.
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